Having sunk that low
is not unique to me –
others have been there.
But my depths are
real and they are mine.
The saving force
came after the sound
of the ringing
when I heard your voice.
Posted on December 15, 2014, in Poetry and tagged DoubleU, John White, Poetry, Your Voice. Bookmark the permalink. 14 Comments.
So inspiring. Great words! A really top poem! I like!
Doors are still closed. Loved it! There is comfort in music. Specially when you want to retire from
Eerily enticing!
I cant find you in my reader i have to go check on your post thru my stat
Took a while to fully comprehend your full meaning here. Hurry back, this space has turned into a vo
I love this!! So true :) I have missed your writing, my "reader" doesn't show me the people I follow
Ah yes, the silence With all its traces.. :)
Excellent poem... I could not avoid thinking of this song which I truly like... I hope that you do t
You have captured this sense and emotion perfectly in a few well chosen images. Well written.
Thank you, Chris! I’m glad you enjoyed it.
So true. So often I am that voice.
That’s really nice.
Thank you very much! I’m glad you enjoyed it.
God, it’s so profound and short, in a good way of course. It’s like I can see this person in my mind who matches the voice but it’s like…what tone is this voice? Very nice 🙂
Thank you so much! i’m glad you enjoyed it.
Love it’s simplicity and ability to carry its thoughts across. Beautiful piece
Thank you so much! I’m glad you enjoyed it.
simplicity lives so harmoniously with poignancy in this piece. lovely, john
Thank you, Christy! I’m glad you liked it. Great to meet you!
likewise john!
Thank you
Thank you for visiting and for the comment. I’m glad you liked it.