Mom
I.
If you could be here right now,
There would be laughter, I’m sure.
If I could see you right now,
There would be no doubt I love you.
II.
If allowed a return to days,
The songs I could play for you,
By the thousands you could listen.
There would be no doubt of friendship.
III.
If the fates would only allow,
One more moment spent with you,
Joyous time would be enjoined.
There would be no doubt we love you.
IV.
If only for an instant,
Your voice once more could be heard,
To hear you call me Hot Rod.
There would be no doubt you love me.
V.
But again the time has come,
A reminder to count days.
Now fourteen Februarys.
There is no doubt you are gone.
Posted on February 6, 2015, in Poetry and tagged DoubleU, John White, Mom, Poetry. Bookmark the permalink. 88 Comments.
Nice and very touching..
Thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed it. It’s great to meet you!
Samehere.. thank you
That was nice Hot Rod. Mine called me T-Baby. Be Groovy.
Thank you, T-Baby. Moms are the best but they can sure come up with some embarrassing nicknames for us. But that never mattered because it was Mom.
Exactly.
I love this so much, and Granny would have too.
Thank you, Kaitlyn! That means a lot. Loveth thou!
So beautiful
Thank you, Caroline! I’m glad you enjoyed it. It’s great to meet you!
My pleasure! Great to meet you too. Xx
This is just a beautiful poem John. Very heartfelt and touching.
Kind Regards,
-Naima
Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked it.
Thank you, Naima! I’m glad you enjoyed it. It’s impossible to replace a mom and even less likely to stop missing a mom.
I can’t agree more, John!!
-Naima
Beautiful and well versed tribute.
Thank you, Peter! I’m glad you enjoyed it. It’s a tough life lesson – moms are irreplaceable.
Incredible.
Thank you, Mary! i’m glad you liked it. It’s great to meet you!
Beautiful! 🙂
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Hugs
Thank you so much! We can all use a hug!
I believe in the power of hugs
My sister died ten minutes before Valentine’s Day, thirty-one years ago – time passes and life moves on but the sorrow always lingers. Sorry about the loss of your mother.
It’s something we never truly get over. Often I’ve been told that I would feel better in time and that I won’t miss her like I did shortly after her death. That’s partly true – I miss her more now rather than less. Having lost a brother, I can identify with your loss and I feel for you and what I can imagine you’ve gone through and are still going through. It’s never easy and so often it never gets easier.
Lovely poem. I’m sorry about your mom. I lost mine just short of a year ago. Thanks for sharing the bittersweet.
Beautiful! Glad our paths crossed. 🙂
Thank you, Jennifer! I’m glad you enjoyed this and I’m happy to meet you!
thank you for this..mine just left..she called me Ginger
Thank you, Susan! Moms are the best. The nicknames they have for us might embarrass us as teenagers but one day we realize we come to live for those moments. When we’re without our moms those are the things stand out and that we tend to miss most.
Very sweet to honor your mother’s memory with this poem.
Thank you, Gail! I’m glad you liked it. It’s great to meet you!
Riveting!
Thank you!
This is very moving…one of your best. Love, Sissy
Thank you, Sis! That means a lot. Love you much!
I’m teary eyed… great write… so touching… nice one… 🙂
Thank you. I’m glad you liked it and that it touched you.
You’re welcome 🙂
now I really really miss my mom …
I’m glad you enjoyed it. Moms are always such an important part of our lives and they are hard to live without.
Yes .. so true …
😿😿😿, 👏👏👏 very sincere and meaningful~~~ 👌👌👌👌
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It’s absolutely beautiful! Mom will always be closest to one’s heart. She’s irreplaceable!
Thank you! Our moms gave us life and there is always a unique bond with them. You’re right. They’re irreplaceable. It’s great to meet you!
Yes 😊 great to meet u too!
This is absolutely painful. Beautiful, haunting but painful. There is no replacement for a mother, ever. Being so very close to my own mum, I can’t even begin to imagine how difficult it must be for you. Be blessed.
Thank you! I was told 14 years ago that I would feel better and that the pain would get better. I suppose it did but one thing that’s never gone away is that I miss her. In fact, I miss her more now than I did then. Moms can never be replaced.
This is beautiful.
Thank you, Sarah. i’m glad you enjoyed it. It’s great to meet you!
Your poem is such a lovely tribute to your mother. It makes me want to start working on a poem for my mother, while she is still here to read it. Maybe my father, too. There is a lot of love in your words. Your mother must have been very special.
Thank you, Robin! Moms are special and deserve all of our tributes. It’s great to meet you!
Thanks. Nice to meet you!
Reblogged this on vickykimtai.
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Anytime..like the poem its a ncy piece of art
A beautiful, touching poem. 🙂
Thank you, Louise! I’m glad you enjoyed it.
So tender, so touching; this is a lovely gift.
Thank you very much! I’m glad you enjoyed it. It’s great to meet you!
What a wonderful poem. It portrays emotion very well. 🙂
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You too! 😀
Thanks for finding my blog and also following it. I hope you like it and keep visiting. Your’s is an awesome blog! I really liked this piece, touching and beautiful.
You’re welcome and thank you for visiting and following. I look forward to more of your writing. It’s great to meet you!
Awww…nothing like a mom!
I agree! Moms are unique and nearly impossible to live without. It’s great to meet you!
Sweet words. Reminds me of my mom who passed away three months ago. It’s difficult. Btw, thanks for sharing, John.
Thank you, Cherry! Losing your mom is as tough as anything we can experience. I certainly sympathize with what you’re going through. I know it’s hard. Honor her by living as fully as you can. It’ great to meet you!
Very beautiful, and bitter-sweet. Thank you for this.
Thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed it.
Wow, this is beautiful. I just lost my daddy on December 28th. I was away for Christmas with the in-laws . . . I’ve written a few poems about him in poetry classes I have taken. I will have to share those on my blog sometime. Keep up the good work. I pray you find comfort in those lonely moments of remembrance. ❤
Thank you Jennifer! The loss of a mother or father can be tough and a pain we never truly recover from. It certainly is true that we never stop missing them. I look forward to reading more of your work. It’s great to meet you!
Ditto! 😃
Very sweet tribute to your mother. 🙂
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Beautiful!
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So much emotion with the use of written words. It’s simply… Amazing 😍😍
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That was beautiful beyond words 🙂
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very sad, very moving, very real.
Thank you, Ann! 🙂