happiness
I don’t know how you have eluded me
but I’m determined to find you
love
you’ve often left me alone and in despair
but I swear my heart will remain full
brass ring
for a lifetime you’ve been out of range
but I vow to achieve the height to reach you
life
I have yet to truly experience your best
but it is my mission to fully feel you
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Posted on November 2, 2015, in Poetry and tagged DoubleU, John White, Poetry, Vows. Bookmark the permalink. 46 Comments.
A really interesting piece! I hope that you're keeping well and still writing! 😊
So inspiring. Great words! A really top poem! I like!
Doors are still closed. Loved it! There is comfort in music. Specially when you want to retire from
Eerily enticing!
I cant find you in my reader i have to go check on your post thru my stat
Took a while to fully comprehend your full meaning here. Hurry back, this space has turned into a vo
I love this!! So true :) I have missed your writing, my "reader" doesn't show me the people I follow
Ah yes, the silence With all its traces.. :)
DoubleU = W 
A bautiful promise of a persistent endeavor!
Thank you! 🙂 Giving up is not an option. 🙂
No, it is not, and it fills me with joy knowing that there are others thinking along the same lines of warrior thoughts 😀
Pulling punches in life will get you knocked out. 😉 😀
🙂 Eitehr by love or lack of love, we always end up being KO 😀
At some point we won’t be able to get up off the mat so we need to fight as many rounds as possible before then. 😀
I agree 🙂
That’s a lovely composition & a lovely thought!
Thank you, Kunal! 🙂
So inspiring ❤
Thanks, Hasmeet! 🙂 Not too dark this time, I hope. 😉
Yep 😊😊
🙂
Such lovely words!
Thank you so much! 🙂 It’s great to meet you!
And you too! Have a great day! 🙂
Right at ya’! 😀
Beautiful!!
Thank you! 🙂
Keep Going….
Thank you, Bushka! 🙂 An addendum may be required for this one one day. 😀
Thanks
Thank you! 🙂
Lovely.
Thank you, Elisabet! 🙂 It’s great to meet you!
Like wise.
From my experience quite a climb, but a necessary one.
Thank you, Alan! 🙂 Press on and keep climbing!
Great goal. I pray you reach and get a hold on life indeed.
Thank you! 🙂 It’s not always easy but if we reach for life we’ll find it eventually.
Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice 🙂
Thank you, Michael! 🙂
I have nominated you for a three day quote challenge. I hope you don’t mind. For the rules you can visit.. http://www.deepinsidethelonersmind.wordpress.com
Thank you, Anne! 🙂 Time permitting, I’ll jump in.
I’ll look forward for them.☺☺
So sweet…
Thank you! 🙂
My motto is- don’t let life just beat you up. Pick up a sword, declare war, and fight brilliantly. No one else is going to fight it for you. Hats off to you John for being a fellow warrior
Thank you! 🙂 That’s the hard part – each of us has to live our lives and fight our own fight making i everyone for themselves. But we’re fighting. 😀
Yep..Happiness..you can’t hide from me.
Thank you, Mary! 🙂 Sometimes we have to search and dig for it but we can find happiness. It’s great to meet you!
Yep..Happiness is in everyone..once we find it, we must never let go. A pleasure meeting you too. Cheerio.
And you most welcome John..Hugs.
That’s right. Never let go. Hang on to it for dear life. 😀
Beautiful. We all need to vow to this
Thank you! 🙂