My Eyes Have Opened

those nights when you thought

you might lose me, when

you were sure that tomorrow’s

call wouldn’t come, when

you were certain that we had

been together for the final time, when

you knew that an end was

drawing far too near

.

I felt it too and was just

as sure as you were, when

I was crawling my way to bed

only when it became necessity, when

I was lying awake for hours

planning my own interment, when

I felt sure that my eyes were closing

for the final time

.

let’s not be so sure again

my eyes have opened

often since then

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About John White

I've written off and on my entire life. It took years for me to finally take putting words together seriously. Now it's not, nor does it ever feel, like work. Writing daily has become habitual. No day is complete without words having appeared on the page.

Posted on January 15, 2016, in Poetry, Uncategorized and tagged , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 61 Comments.

  1. True……echoes my post on ‘Afterthoughts’…. https://afterthought2016.wordpress.com/ Cheers!

  2. Well done. I really like this.

  3. Reblogged this on geelayo and commented:
    I do love this!!

  4. Love and live each and every day of your life!

  5. Sad, but finally optimistic 🙂 I like that, John

  6. At 78 my response to this was the memory of so many years of nights I wakened and stayed very still so I could hear if my husband was breathing. Finally, I’ve either been reassured by the many nights we’ve survived or gotten stronger from driving him full speed to the ER enough times to trust that we’ll get there in time again. Or maybe, now I’m just too old and tired to waste sleep time on worry. 🙂

    • Thank you, Eileen! 🙂 When we care deeply about someone it can be incredibly difficult to go through what you’ve been through. Those nights can stretch into an eternity and well beyond. I hope all is well. 🙂 It’s great to meet you!

  7. I love this. So beautiful and meaningful

  8. The beginning many have yet to go.. 🙂

  9. Well said, sir! On so many levels… may our eyes remain openable… 🙂

  10. Wonderfully written.

  11. Oh my God – first thing I read this morning. You have no idea how much I needed to read this!!!! It is beautiful, gives me faith. Thank you John… this was very, very, very needed.

    • Thank you, Ramona! 🙂 It’s great to share our experiences and I assure you that reading your comment and all the comments from everyone here every day ives me strength. You’re too kind.

  12. These words have such passion and love 🙂 Love it…

  13. Tring-Tring

    Eyes open
    To dew drops on her cheeks
    Another Day,
    She thanks god for
    Live each day as it is
    your last
    She has heard people say
    She now understands
    It is not a good philosophy
    To live by
    Or let people live by
    For there will be other days
    And a day spent with optimism
    Impatient optimism
    for Another
    bright spring morning
    is better
    than the last day.
    Always live like it is the day
    Before
    The last day.

  14. I love this

  15. Beautiful and optimistic.

  16. I shared this on Facebook.

  17. Morgan Monique Byers

    I really needed something to help me have a reason to keep going so I read this poem over again absolutely great post

  18. Aww this poem is so touching. Thanks for sharing!

  19. Everything has its place and time.

  20. I’ve enjoyed this. Very touching.

  21. I love this poem, so meaningful.

  22. Thank you very much. It is nice to be connected. Our imagined world will be exchanged then.

    Many thanks
    From Nepal.

  23. Wonderful piece. And to wall off our heart..means to never love or to be loved.
    So happy I found your writings.

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