Storms Like These
rain – the kind of rain
you’re sure will bring down the sky
wind – the kind of wind
you’re sure will bring down all around you
thunder – the kind of thunder
you’re sure will crumble the walls
lightning – the kind of lightning
you’re sure will puncture the ceiling
.
while others choose to cower, I revel
storms like these remind me I’m alive,
display a power over which we have no control,
clear out the cobwebs of a humid day,
and can reshape the landscape
.
storm – the kind of storm
you’re sure will end it all
but what a show and what a feeling!
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Posted on March 6, 2016, in Poetry, Uncategorized and tagged DoubleU, John White, Poetry, Storms Like These. Bookmark the permalink. 41 Comments.
Very evocative and real.
Thank you, Bob! 🙂
I really like this one. I feel the wind in my face and can revel in the power of storms in the past and look forward to the storms of the future. Thank you.
Thank you! 🙂 That feeling of the wind on your face sitting on the porch watching the storm roll in can be some incredible therapy. 🙂
Another one I love.
Thank you! 🙂
Reblogged this on llapsed.
Thank you for the reblog! 🙂
absolutely fantastic write.
Thank you! 🙂
Cannot agree more! Love storms like that! Excellent evocation of the feeling.
Thank you! 🙂 Storms can be relaxing, exciting and a great way to clear the mind. It’s great to meet you!
Fantastic!
Thank you, Sofia! 🙂
Oh yes…LOVE this:)
Thank you, Fijay! 🙂 It’s a pleasure to meet you!
You’re welcome …it’s a mutual:)
🙂
Like the poem. Hate the storms.
Thank you, Lilly! 🙂 Those storms can be the best part of a bad, humid, oppressive summer day but I’ve known many who simply hate a storm to roll through.
Lovely lines John. Thanks for sharing. I believe we should have that power to speak out too.
Thank you! 🙂 Sometimes it’s nice to cause a storm. 😉
The end of the world—could there be a greater spectacle?
Thank you, Alan! 🙂 A spectacle like that should be seen from the front row. 🙂
Beautiful
Thank you, Hamza! 🙂 It’s great to meet you!
Well, I love both the poem AND storms. Wonderful writing, John.
Thank you, Mary! 🙂 Nothing like a good, loud storm. 🙂
Gets the old blood circulating. 😀
Oh it sure does!
A lifelike!
Thank you! 🙂 It’s a pleasure to meet you!
My pleasure. :))
🙂
:)) Regards
Reblogged this on wwwpalfitness.
Thank you for the reblog!
Yes, I can really empathise.
Thank you, Frederick! 🙂
Thank you! 🙂 There’s nothing like a good, loud storm. Like you said, it’s great to revel in one of these forces of nature. It’s great to meet you!
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